-will there be any updates of after fmp
-will there be any group meetings
fourth
third sentence too small
should design to scale, subtler small
back design
angle of exposed is wrong, looks off
tilt it a bit more
heart looks like mouth
making the heart big is questionalbe
good 3d dinensional heart
small changes
think about scale
too full
heart lower, speech bubble number
work on the scale
use a different font for the scale
pink=lady-like, teenager
maybe broden the color scheme
dominating evetyhing
pink color, salmon, purple
secondary color
pallete with the final outcome poster
(multiple paleete)
experiment
heart not straight line curve like the cup
upload blog for feedback
final outcome for exhibiton screenfriendly
make it look GOOD